SMASH! Page 2

Second page of mine and

Something I would like to clear up is that I've never had to draw several pages of action scenes. I needed internet references just to help me, so I apologise if this doesn't look great.

To be honest, my biggest concern with this page is the top middle one. I know it's suppose to show the action of Mario throwing several punches, but I'm not sure if it's conveyed very well. If it's not then I may try to find a way to change that particular panel because that's the only part that worries me.

Other than that, I think this page is pretty much straight forward. Mario and Giga Bowser brawl and it's obvious who won the fight.

Another thing I would like to mention is that this page was sketched at the same time as the first one, which is why I've been able to upload it as soon as I can. While I do know what's going to happen in the rest of the comic, I still need to think about the layout and what would be the most conveniant for me. I would like at the very least four panels per page.

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